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- Some pretty shaky manual ref notes here that I'd like to see straightened out. Or removed, since some of those won't meet modern standard.
- Should be split into two subsections with relevant imagery added, and possibly another quote for the new section header.
- HNN release date isn't sourcable to itself.
- Is the novel her first appearance or not? The {{1st}} is used elsewhere. 04:23, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- Pronouns/gender update. 04:24, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. 00:04, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
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- Death reference to be merged into one reference per modern precedent.
- Pronouns/gender update.
- Ideally we'll want some imagery in that biography of one of the several subject-linked things.
- Equipment to be sectioned out. 04:32, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. 00:04, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
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- Due to Jarik Vuintor existing, that {{Youmay}} will need to be swapped out for a disambig page via {{Otheruses}}.
- Pronouns/gender update.
- Would like to see an image of StarForge station (or other IU topic) for the biography as is currently imageless.
- Requires skills and equipment to be sectioned out of the PT. Clothing to be added to the equipment as well.
- BtS: The encyclopedia sentence isn't needed; so that can be trimmed, and the paragraphs can be merged. That'll also solve the issue of the first BtS paragraph being unreferenced. 03:54, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- Marked for probation at one month unaddressed. 02:51, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
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- Gender/pronouns update.
- Given it's four paragraphs, that can be subsectioned into a 2/2.
- The current image can be sized up for the modern default skin, and another subject-relevant one and another quote can be slid in when there's space after the new sectioning is done.
- This is old enough of a GA that the relevant sources should be reviewed to ensure that equipment is documented if there's any, as often wasn't back then. 20:35, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. 00:05, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
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- Ideally we'd get the quote caption linking removed by properly contextualizing that in the article body.
- Needs a TERC date note.
- I'd like to see a 2/2 paragraph split done; with an additional image and quote to sort alongside that. 02:55, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. 00:09, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- The first sentence of the biography needs some referencing work since that first part surely isn't citable to the Essential Atlas online companion.
- Body has room for a subject relevant image.
- There seems to be some links missing, just a couple I could spot include the Imperial Period, Galactic Civil War.
- Might it be worth adding the date for when the Alliance formed the New Republic? Lewisr (talk) 00:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Body could use a subject relevant image.
- Notice thinks like parent, Imperial officer not being linked so I'd like to see a run through to link anything else that needs it.
- Some of the PT section seems like it would be more suited to an equipment section.
- Is there anything of note that can be in a skills section?
- BTS needs to be cleaned to match modern standards and sourced. Lewisr (talk) 04:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Corellia needs context.
- I'd like to see the two Biography paragraphs rearranged into three; so that they're all just a bit smaller. There should be some imagery of subject-relevant things tucked in to match.
- Seems like some of that PT is skills.
- Should standardize the BtS to mention the series and issue number separately, and the second comic also needs its author. 03:27, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
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- A subject-linked relevant image can be tucked in the History.
- Licha In and Asation technically needs context, as both are not in the same sentence as the other contextualized worlds.
- That attack mentioned in the last two sentences of the History seems like it could have its own page stubbed to link.
- The HNN content should be contextualized as if reported in the CoCo Edition of the IU HNN as most HNN noms are nowadays.
- Unsourced BTS, which also requires the month and other context traditional nowadays for Adventure Journal BTS sections. Some of the later bits can also be chopped. 15:57, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Pronouns/gender update.
- Those paragraphs are larger than ideal in the modern skin. I'd like to see them rearranged into 4-5 and then into two subsections.
- This is an old enough nom that a cursory check for missing equipment (even if clothes) should be checked for, as I see he used a knife at least, and also for additional skills info (to be taken out of the PT or added to).
- If the character themselves doesn't appear in the essential guide used to cite species, a manual ref note is needed explaining that that guide identified the species that Mushkil was described as in [whatever other source]. 03:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Pronouns/gender update.
- If in The New Essential Chronology, it needs to note the IU publication.
- Clothing/weaponry as equipment.
- Skills to be sectioned on its own.
- In the modern skin this'd look better chopped up as 4-5 paragraphs, all a bit smaller, in two subsections. 02:30, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Infobox exclusive inforamtion regarding hair, eye, and skin color.
- Use of slave to be changed per modern standards
- Needs an equipment section.
- BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant information, needs a full release date, and to be sourced. Lewisr (talk) 03:39, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- 'who lived during the last decades of the Galactic Republic' is intro exclusive and I think if it's going to be kept and put in the body it should be changed to lived during the Republic's reign (or some form of variant).
- The 44 BBY in the bodyneeds to be cited to another source.
- The body could use a subject relevant image.
- Is there anything that can be included in an equipment and/or powers/abilities section Lewisr (talk) 00:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Body could use a subject relevant image.
- I think it should made more clear at first mention of the Jedi Temple that it's located on Coruscant.
- Some of the personality/traits section seems more suitable in a powers/abilities section.
- Is there anything to be noted in an equipment section? Lewisr (talk) 00:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Death field should combine the location and date into a note per precedent.
- Species, gender, and height infobox exclusive.
- The new donor field needs to be added and filled in.
- Gree redirect to be fixed.
- Is Dooku being the Separatist's leader and Gunray being a Separatist Council member citable to the episode?
- Needs an equipment section.
- Beyond including the trooper's height, is there anything of note that can be added in a personality/traits section, same question for a skills/abilities section. Lewisr (talk) 01:33, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Agamar in the intro could use context, Had Abbadon and Korriban in the body could use context.
- The image currently in the powers/abilities section would be better served in the biography.
- Hair and eye color should be mentioned in a personality/traits section along with anything else of note.
- Some of the powers/abilities section looks to be more relevant for an equipment section.
- The BTS can be cleaned up to remove 'She was not identified as an Imperial Knight until her next appearance' and just mention the comments from Duursema instead. Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- Body can use at least one subject relevant image.
- I'd like to see the Death Troopers date added into the legacy section.
- Some of the powers/abilities section would be better suited in an equipment section (along with any other relevant details). Lewisr (talk) 00:12, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Hair color is infobox exclusive.
- Skere Kaan being a Dark Lord of the Sith is intro exclusive.
- The BBY date for Path of Destruction need a source.
- Missing an equipment section.
- The BTS needs to cleaned up to remove some irrelevant information regarding the novel, and both sources need a release date (full dates for the comic and just year for the novel). Lewisr (talk) 01:50, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Death field should follow precedent of including date and location in a date note.
- Needs a pronouns update.
- The biography needs to make it more clear that Kamino is the trooper's homeworld.
- Bio could use a subject relevant image.
- Is there anything that can be aded into a skills/abilities section or equipment section? Lewisr (talk) 01:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Per the layout guide, any events not mentioned in the body need to be removed from the infobox.
- Jedi Order should be in the infobox for factions.
- If the battle is mentioned in The New Essential Chronology, then should it not document it's in-universe since that is an in-universe source? Lewisr (talk) 00:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- Is there any need for the doulbe reffing in the death field? If necessary, it should be included in a date note as per precedent.
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Eye color is infobox exclusive.
- The biography could use a subject relevant image.
- Hair color should be moved to a personality/traits section, and any other relevant information included.
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS to be cleaned up to modern standards, and full cited release dates given. Lewisr (talk) 00:04, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- Eye and skin color are infobox exclusive.
- The biography should either be sectioned or the paragraphs reworked so there isn't 4.
- Phaegon III needs context.
- Some of the personality/traits section should be moved to an equipment section (and anything else relevant to be included added).
- I think the caption for the Relin Druur image in the PT should be made relevant to that section or just remove the image altogether. Lewisr (talk) 00:14, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- Socorro could use contet in the intro.
- Biography should either be sectioned or the paragraphs reworked into 3 equally sized ones.
- Some of the powers/abilities would be better suited in an equipment section (as well as her other equipment).
- BTS needs to use a full release date with a citable source sine it cannot be to the comic itself. Lewisr (talk) 00:23, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- The death field should follow the precedent of including the date and location in a note if not directly citable to a source.
- Needs a pronouns update.
- I think a date should be added in the intro.
- I'm not seeing a reason to cite two different databanks for clone troopers, should pick one and stick with it.
- The image in the biography can be increased in size.
- Some of the personality/traits information is better suited for an equipment section.
- Anything of note that can be added into a skills/abilites section?
- The release date needs a source as it cannot be cited to the comic. Lewisr (talk) 00:39, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns update.
- Kamino being the homeworld, height, hair, and eye color all infobox exclusive.
- Any reason the skin color wasn't added?
- Links for Joram and Cherek to be removed from the captions, if there's no way to include Livintius in prose then context for them needs to be added in the caption.
- Context for Pengalan IV needs to be added in the intro, and I think in the body it should be moved to first mention of the location.
- Biography can use more images
- Context for Teeks at first mention.
- Missing an equipment section.
- Is there anything that can be added into a skills/abilities section. Lewisr (talk) 00:19, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- The death field should follow the precedent of including date and location in a written note if not cited directly to a source.
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- I noticed that Evan-Ott stated this event was in 22 BBY, while this 21 BBY, so the date should be investigated and corrected if necessary.
- Not seeing the need for the double references in the Padawan field.
- Carrying over from Wookieepedia:EC/Evan-Ott, The attack against Ithorian terrorists probably needs to have its own article.
- A'Sharad Hett being a Jedi Knight should be included in the body.
- BTS needs to be cleaned up to redundant information and to also be cited for the remaining comic issue info.
- Category:Individuals with lost eyes looks to be applicable. Lewisr (talk) 00:30, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- This battle where a Padawan betrayed their own master, we have a concrete date, a concrete place, and both sides known (Jedi and Ithorian terrorists) seems notable enough for a page. In fact, "attack against Ithorian terrorists" would be a non-conjecture name Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:54, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- Body could use a subject relevant image.
- Anything of note to add into a skills/abilities section?
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove some redundant wording. The comic needs a full release date and cannot be cited to the issue itself. And also needs a release date for the audio drama.
- Should Category:Enforcers be added? Lewisr (talk) 01:20, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns gender/update.
- I feel like the information about Galduran's belt being sold during the events of KOTOR would be better placed in the biography.
- Release dates should be provided for the strategy guide (this and KOTOR will need a full release date since same year and month of release) and ESB. Lewisr (talk) 00:28, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Biograhy ould use a subject relevant image.
- Some of the personality/traits would be better placed in a powers/abilities section.
- Anything that can be added into an equipment section?
- In the BTS, The Essential Reader's Companion needs a full release date as the same year of release as Insider 137.
- Full release date for SWTOR isn't necessary. Lewisr (talk) 00:14, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns update.
- Death field should follow modern precedent of including date and location in a note if not directly citable to a source.
- Redirect to be fixed.
- Later mentions of CC-2224 to be changed to Cody since he's not introduced as that earlier which would confuse who is being referred to later.
- Seems likt the image in the biography would be better served moving down to the second paragraph.
- Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities section?
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS needs to provide a full release date for the comic. Lewisr (talk) 01:10, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Body needs to include that the trooper is a human male, and the height is infobox exclusive.
- Needs a pronouns update.
- The clone is categorised as being part of Green Company but this isn't mentioned anyway in the body.
- Redirect to be fixed.
- Anything that can be added in a skills/abilities section?
- Missing an equipment section. Lewisr (talk) 00:33, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- As I understand, we no longer list individuals in the affiliations field.
- Biography should be sectioned.
- If there's another quote that can be added, then should be added in the new section created with the above.
- Anything that can be included in equipment and skills/abilities sections?
- BTS to be cleaned upto modern standards, removing redundant information about future releases, and be sourced. Lewisr (talk) 00:48, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Per the layout guide 'The "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.'
- Death Squadron, Endor, and second Death Star could context in the intro. Death Squadron, Endor, and Bakura needs context in the biography too.
- Biography could use a subject relevant image.
- Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities or equipment section?
- BTS needs to remove some redundant wording about the mention in Truce at Bakura. Also needs context for Truce at Bakura and The Essential Guide to Warfare.
- Missing a relevant species category. Lewisr (talk) 00:13, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Death field should follow the precedent of including date and location in a note if not directly citable to a source.
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Is the first Padawan notable for a page?
- If mentioned in The New Essential Chronology then it needs to include its in-universe mention.
- I think the image of Dama should be moved down a little and made bigger.
- Anything that can be included in an equipment section?
- BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant information about later sources that mention Cei. What is left needs to be sourced. Lewisr (talk) 00:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a proouns/gender update.
- Hair and eye color are infobox exclusive.
- Captions link to be remved.
- Biography could use a subject relevant image.
- I think a date for when Tash and Zak visited the memorial would be worth adding.
- Could use a go through to change the uses of slave/slaver to match the current wording being used (i.e. enslaver etc).
- Context for Noremac needed.
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS could use release dates for the various sources mentioned. Lewisr (talk) 00:13, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update, and the family fields to be filled in/cleared.
- Extremely objectifying language to be removed from all aspects of the article, including infobox.
- Instead of saying 'in the final decades of the Old Republic' the body should use the years given in the infobox.
- The weight should be included in the infobox. And the information about the height and weight in the body should be moved to the personality/traits section.
- BTS needs to be sourced and some redundant information about the reprint removed. Also the Heroes & Rogues needs a release year. If room once the section is tidied up then an image might be possible to be added. Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
- Death field needs to follow the precedent of including the date and location in a note if not directly citable to a source.
- Needs a pronouns update, and the body needs to directly state Bel was male (and remove the gender link on the he pronoun).
- Per the layout guide 'The "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.'
- Inconsitent referencing between the body and intro regarding homeworld to be fixed.
- Vassek and Jango Fett need context.
- Bestine's context of being an Inner Rim planet needs to be sourced as it's not mentioned in the episode.
- Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities section?
- Missing an equipment section.
- The insider 106 issue mentioned needs a release date. Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- Is the double referencing for the death field necessary? If the comics date themselves to the year then only one issue needs to be cited.
- Need a pronouns/gender update.
- Eye color infobox exclusive.
- Double referencing at the end of the biography to be addressed, the info should be cited to the specific issue.
- Missing a personality/traits section (with the brown hair information from the biography), as well as an equipment one.
- BTS needs to include the publisher and provide full cited release dates for the mentioned comics. Lewisr (talk) 00:48, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a pronouns/gender update. If the character isn't actually female then the page needs moving.
- Skin color is infobox exclusive.
- Body could use a subject relevant image if no other images of the Knight are available.
- Not seeing a need for the double referencing used in a couple instances, should be cited to the specific issue in places.
- BTS needs to include the publisher for the comic. Lewisr (talk) 00:11, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Gender and height are infobox exclusive.
- Needs a pronouns update.
- The clone is categorised as part of Green Company but this isn't reflected anywhere in the body. So needs to be mentioned if it's actually the case.
- Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities section?
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS needs to include an airdate for the episode. Lewisr (talk) 21:51, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- Needs a gender/pronouns update, and if the character isn't male then a move to a new title will be necessary.
- Can the eye color be determeined?
- Biography could use an image.
- Hair color should be moved to a personality and traits section, which should also include the character's skin color, and anything else of note. Lewisr (talk) 01:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Is the double referencing for the death field necessary? If the comics date themselves to the year then only one issue needs to be cited.
- Needs a gender/pronouns update, and if the character isn't male then a move to a new title will be necessary.
- Skin color can be determined.
- Hair color should be moved to a personality and traits section, which should also include the character's eye and skin color, and anything else of note.
- Missing an equipment section.
- BTS needs to include full cited release dates for both issues. Lewisr (talk) 01:11, 30 July 2024 (UTC)