Talk: Serafina360
Re:TCW
To ensure quality, please review TCW-related Featured and Good Articles, especially battle articles, after you've studied our complete set of policies (going beyond just the Manual of Style). We're looking for edits of a high standard, well-written content, and a solid grasp of English grammar. Given that the TCW episode is new, you won't need to delve into extensive research, which should simplify the sourcing process. Just utilize resources like TCW children's magazines from the UK, episode guides, etc. Additionally, our tutorials can provide assistance for other article writing tasks. Also make sure to review the GAN guidelines. Best of luck, JangFett (Talk) 20:40, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re: First Skirmish on Carlac
The skirmish would commence at the moment fighting erupts, specifically when Ahsoka launches an attack on the Death Watch trooper wielding the flamethrower. It would then continue until all fighting comes to an end—the speeder chase is undoubtedly an integral part of the skirmish, considering Ahsoka's battle with Bo-Katan while aboard the speeder. CC7567 (talk) 01:06, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re: List of Phrases and Slang
Just offering some friendly advice, from one editor to another. It might be wise to cease removing the sections of slang list entries that read "Equivalent to the realworld phrase..." Some of the administrators might become agitated and view such content removal as a form of vandalism. Those sections exist for a valid purpose (to illustrate contextual usage) and enhance the article's value. I'm simply trying to help you avoid potential issues. ShannarythVenhallyn (talk) 19:22, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
Revised: My concerns are now withdrawn and considered void, as the removal was merely a temporary step. Pay it no mind. ShannarythVenhallyn (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re: Carlac
It's great to see your enthusiasm for writing an article! The article is required to adhere to all the criteria specified at the top of the GAN page, including—but not limited to—thorough sourcing, appropriate context for all characters/events/droids/subjects, more quotes and images if available, etc. You should also examine other sources for appearances and references in source material; from what I recall, there are additional editions of Star Wars: The Clone Wars Magazine and Star Wars: The Clone Wars Comic UK that mention the skirmish, along with the episode guides on StarWars.com, and potentially more Encyclopedia entries as well. To gain a clearer understanding of the expectations for both formatting and writing, I suggest reviewing any of the current GAs; the event articles, in particular, would serve as excellent examples. I hope this proves helpful. CC7567 (talk) 03:05, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
- While I have access to some magazines, I don't have them all. And indeed, even if the article isn't submitted to the GAN page, enhancing the Sources list or simply refining the writing would still significantly benefit the site. CC7567 (talk) 16:57, February 3, 2013 (UTC) It's definitely looking much better and more organized now. My main recommendation would be to explore opportunities to expand the information and incorporate more details from the episode into the article. CC7567 (talk) 17:03, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
Help
Hello Serafina, I'm reaching out to you with a request, given your proficiency as a native English speaker, unlike myself. Could you please verify whether I've made any errors on the Aayla Secura page, specifically in the section addressing the betrayal on Honoghr? Your assistance is greatly appreciated! Maguinic (talk) 18:40, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
- I'm grateful for your corrections; I still find it challenging to express myself in English... Regarding Quinlan Vos, my intention was to convey that he was spying on Dooku on behalf of the Jedi Order, but I'm uncertain how to phrase this accurately. Do you understand my intended meaning? Maguinic ( talk ) 13:19, February 16, 2013 (UTC) Perfect, that sounds great. I've made the necessary corrections. Maguinic (talk) 17:23, February 16, 2013 (UTC)
Reverts
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