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- Nomination Submitted By : Lewisr ( discussion )
- Nomination Date : 19:14, January 5, 2025 (UTC)
- Following current standards, the birth field's date and location should be presented in a written note.
- Resolve the existing fact tag and citation template issues.
- The main content could benefit from the inclusion of additional visuals.
- Repair any broken redirects.
- It appears the personality/traits section could be expanded into three distinct paragraphs.
- The "Character creation" section within the BTS area requires proper sectioning. Lewisr ( talk ) 19:14, January 5, 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination Submitted By : Lewisr ( discussion )
- Nomination Date : 19:24, January 5, 2025 (UTC)
- Fact tag and citation template issues need resolution.
- Provide context for Yavin 4 and Kolaador. Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 03:30, February 6, 2025 (UTC)
- The main content could benefit from the inclusion of additional visuals.
- Repair any broken redirects. Fixed --Vitus InfinitusTalk 03:30, February 6, 2025 (UTC)
- The "On the run" section requires sub-sectioning. Lewisr ( talk ) 19:24, January 5, 2025 (UTC) Sub-sectioned --Vitus InfinitusTalk 03:30, February 6, 2025 (UTC) I also intended to include the "Infiltrating the Terror" section, which would also benefit from sub-sectioning Lewisr (talk) 20:57, February 10, 2025 (UTC)
- The BTS section's top portion could use a heading, perhaps "Milestones" or something similar. I'd also like it developed into three paragraphs (possibly by merging the first two?).
- It seems some content from the personality/traits section should be relocated to a skills/abilities section, along with any relevant additional information.
- An equipment section is necessary. Lewisr ( talk ) 20:57, February 10, 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination Submitted By : Lewisr ( discussion )
- Nomination Date : 19:01, February 5, 2025 (UTC)
- The death field should adhere to current standards by including the date and location in a written date note if it's not directly sourced.
- A pronouns/gender update is needed.
- I suggest the opening quote be integrated into the biography, which would also eliminate the caption link for Bria.
- The biography's initial section should be divided into subsections, and the paragraphs within the section should be reviewed for potential restructuring into shorter segments.
- There's room to add more images, and some existing ones should be enlarged.
- Replace "slave" with "enslaved."
- The events of Hero's Trial require a sourced date.
- The in-universe reference in The New Essential Chronology needs complete documentation and dating.
- Can anything be added to skills/abilities and/or equipment sections?
- The BTS section should remove redundant information, including other materials in which Dewlannamapia was mentioned. Lewisr ( talk ) 19:01, February 5, 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination Submitted By : Lewisr ( discussion )
- Nomination Date : 15:20, February 10, 2025 (UTC)
- The citation template needs to be resolved.
- A pronouns/gender update is necessary.
- The biography could benefit from subsectioning, as several current sections are quite lengthy.
- The above would allow for additional quotes (if available) and images. Several existing images could also be enlarged.
- The redlink needs to be resolved.
- Portions of the personality/traits section should be divided into skills/abilities and equipment sections. Lewisr ( talk ) 15:20, February 10, 2025 (UTC)
- The birth year citation needs reinforcement to clarify why Droids is dated as it is, which then allows for the calculation of her birth year.
- Pronouns/gender update required.
- The "Early life" section would benefit from an image relevant to the subject.
- Some of the biography's lower subsections, especially those exceeding three paragraphs, should ideally be further subsectioned. Notably, some have six to seven paragraphs each, and even those paragraphs are somewhat dense and could be split.
- The existing images can have their thumbnails increased in size; there's also room for more images and quotes once the subsectioning is completed.
- Is there no information for a Skills section?
- The BTS section exhibits the bloated, over-regurgitation style common in older SAs, which should be modernized. —spookywillowwtalk 19:09, February 10, 2025 (UTC)
- The death field requires adjustment to use a single reference by converting it into a reference note, as per established precedent.
- The biography should be divided into subsections.
- After subsectioning, there will be space for additional images and another quote, if one is available.
- Context should be added to the current image to directly relate it to Gurion.
- Given that this is an older FA, it should be reviewed for any equipment (clothing or other owned items) or skills information that could be added. —spookywillowwtalk 01:31, February 11, 2025 (UTC)
- Are all the dates directly sourced to their ebooks, or do they require a Reader's Companion note?
- Most of the paragraphs are too dense for the current Fandom skin and should be broken up and appropriately subsectioned once they are of a typical length.
- Once subsectioned, there's room for more quotes and images.
- Given the character's extensive appearances, there should be some mention of equipment.
- Pronouns/gender update is needed.
- The BTS section needs modernization (removal of irrelevant information). —spookywillowwtalk 00:04, February 20, 2025 (UTC)