Talk: Serafina360


Re:TCW


After reviewing all of our policies (not just the Manual of Style), you should take a look at all TCW-related FA/GAs, particularly battle articles. We expect high quality edits, good writing/prose, and a high understanding of English grammar. Since that TCW episode is new, you do not have to look into many sources, so it should be fairly easy when it comes to that. Just look into those TCW kiddy UK magazines, the episode guides, ect, for sources. Our tutorials could also help you for other article writing. Be sure to read the GAN rules as well. Good luck, JangFett 20:40, December 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re: First Skirmish on Carlac


The event would start whenever battle breaks out, i.e. when Ahsoka attacks the Death Watch trooper with the flamethrower. It would continue until whenever hostilities cease—the speeder chase is definitely part of the skirmish, given that Ahsoka is fighting Bo-Katan aboard the speeder. CC7567 01:06, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re: List of Phrases and Slang


Just a friendly recommendation, from one user to another. You should probably stop removing the "Equivalent to the realworld phrase..." segments of the slang list entries. Some of the admin types can get twitchy and may consider such removal of content to be vandalism. Those segments are in there for a good reason (providing illustration of contextual usage) and add value to the article. Just trying to help you avoid pitfalls.ShannarythVenhallyn (talk) 19:22, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Update: Concerns and such retracted and redacted, as the removal was an intermediate step. Don't worry about it.ShannarythVenhallyn (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Carlac


Glad to see your interest in writing an article! The article needs to follow all of the rules listed at the top of the GAN page, particularly—but not limited to—complete sourcing, proper context for all characters/events/droids/subjects, more quotes and images if available, etc. Other sources also need to be checked for appearances and mentions in source material; off the top of my head, I believe there are more issues of Star Wars: The Clone Wars Magazine and Star Wars: The Clone Wars Comic UK that mention the skirmish, as well as the episode guides on StarWars.com, and potentially more Encyclopedia entries as well. I would recommend taking a look at any of the current GAs to get an idea of what's expected, both in terms of formatting and writing; the event articles in particular would be great examples of that. Hope that helps. CC7567 03:05, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

  • I have access to some but not all of the magazines. And yes, even if the article isn't taken to the GAN page, it would still help the site a whole ton to improve the article, with either beefing up the Sources list or even just improving the writing. CC7567 16:57, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

DeceptionFuneral Image


Hello Serafina360! Thank you for telling me. I uploaded several images that day and didn't notice my mistake. I will take care of it immediately. Thanks again. --LennyF (talk) 18:24, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Help


Hi Serafina, I have a service to ask you, because you're a native speaker of English, not me. Can you confirm me that I didn't make errors on the page of Aayla Secura, at the paragraph dealing with the betrayal on Honoghr please? Thank you in advance! Maguinic (talk) 18:40, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

  • Ok, thank you for correcting my mistakes, I still struggle to speak in English... And about Quinlan Vos, I meant that he was spying Dooku on behalf of the Jedi Order, but I'm not sure how to build this sentence. You understand what I means ? Maguinic (talk) 13:19, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Appearances