Talk: Thatgirlwiththestaff

A Reminder

For any new articles created, ensure you include categories and the defaultsort templates. These elements can be readily copied from existing Legends pages. --Alientraveller (talk) 18:05, February 26, 2016 (UTC)

• My apologies, I overlooked that detail! I will correct this moving forward. -- Thatgirlwiththestaff ( talk ) 18:20, February 26, 2016 (UTC)

Guidance on Structure

While I am impressed by the effort you have invested in the article, "Bombing of the Jedi Temple hangar," the "aftermath" section is excessively lengthy. According to Wookieepedia's "Layout Guide," specifically Section 13, which covers Battle, mission, and duel articles: "Aftermath can be utilized for any details pertaining to events that occurred following the conclusion of the primary event, provided such information is accessible. However, as with the Prelude section, the level of detail should not overshadow the article's central topic, which is the event itself." Put differently, the aftermath section should offer a concise summary of subsequent related events that transpired after the article's primary subject (in this instance, the bombing), much like the prelude briefly summarizes the events leading up to the main event. JRT2010 (talk) 08:25, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Concerning the Bombing of the Jedi Temple Hangar

I have relocated the information concerning Skywalker and Tano's investigation to the "main event" section, as it directly resulted from the temple hangar bombing. A parallel situation exists with the "Bombing at the Jedi Temple"—a separate bombing incident that happened after Offee's attack. The main event section of that article provides details about the immediate consequences in addition to the bombing itself. JRT2010 (talk) 00:37, February 20, 2017 (UTC)