Wookieepedia:Good article nominations

Good article nominations: See the latest edits to this page and its associated subpages ## The daughter of Jarek Yeager - This was nominated by: Wok142 ( discussion ) 18:59, January 1, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 550 words (83 in the introduction, 370 in the main section, 97 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object - Could we possibly include a note regarding the artist within the BTS section? NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 16:01, January 5, 2025 (UTC) Done. Wok142 (talk) 02:54, January 6, 2025 (UTC) - I believe that Brandon Auman's role as the series' head writer is a significant detail. NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:07, January 6, 2025 (UTC) Added this info as well. Wok142 (talk) 20:04, January 6, 2025 (UTC) - I suggest verifying the episode Commentary(s). Platform Classic, definitely. If you lack the means to do so, I will personally check on Monday. NBDani (they/them) Yeager's Repairs 15:14, February 22, 2025 (UTC) I'd appreciate it if you could check for me; thank you. Wok142 (talk) 08:03, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - A segment of Justin Ridge's discussion regarding Yeager's loss of his wife and daughter in "Path of Resistance," whether it's that section rewritten or something from Auman, would be a valuable BTS quote. —spookywillowwtalk 15:06, January 6, 2025 (UTC) I've included a quote originating from the Auman interview. As for the Ridge content, he merely recounts Kaz discovering the photo; is there truly a necessity to rewrite that? Wok142 (talk) 20:04, January 6, 2025 (UTC) Not particularly; it would have been necessary to note only if the Ridge quote was selected for a BTS quote to prevent information exclusive to the quote, but since it's the Auman material, it's not needed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:37, January 10, 2025 (UTC) - Should the daughter's pronouns be unspecified, the instances of she/her etc. for the daughter require modification Lewisr ( talk ) 07:14, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - I propose citing Yeager and his wife as the parents to a source other than "Fuel for the Fire," as it doesn't explicitly state it, even if it's implied Lewisr ( talk ) 07:14, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - A date citation is needed for 'later that year' Lewisr ( talk ) 07:14, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - The clothing mentioned should be relocated to an equipment section Lewisr ( talk ) 07:14, January 27, 2025 (UTC) The above issues have been addressed. Wok142 (talk) 06:40, January 28, 2025 (UTC) The biography's opening sentence should be altered, not the second sentence Lewisr (talk) 19:09, January 28, 2025 (UTC) Is it satisfactory now? Wok142 (talk) 00:32, January 29, 2025 (UTC) I've made a minor adjustment for improved readability Lewisr (talk) 20:03, January 30, 2025 (UTC) - The BTS and apps section should likely be updated to reflect the daughter's appearance in a photo Lewisr ( talk ) 07:14, January 27, 2025 (UTC) Is "Pictured in a photo" the appropriate wording for this? Wok142 (talk) 06:40, January 28, 2025 (UTC) I would suggest removing the Po template and stating "(Appears in photograph)," and in the BTS section, "Jarek Yeager's daughter first appeared in a photograph" Lewisr (talk) 19:09, January 28, 2025 (UTC) Done, thank you. Wok142 (talk) 00:32, January 29, 2025 (UTC) - The intro could benefit from including a 34 ABY date for the final sentence Lewisr ( talk ) 19:09, January 28, 2025 (UTC) Good point. Wok142 (talk) 00:32, January 29, 2025 (UTC) - Noting the mention in "Rendezvous Point" seems worthwhile Lewisr ( talk ) 20:03, January 30, 2025 (UTC) Considering that a significant portion of the Biography covers events post-daughter's passing, should it be divided into a Legacy section? Wok142 (talk) 23:54, January 30, 2025 (UTC) Given the current three paragraphs, I'd suggest against it unless you intend to split the initial paragraph into two. Should you choose to do so, it would create an opportunity for an additional quote in the legacy section, but I'll defer the decision to you Lewisr (talk) 05:47, January 31, 2025 (UTC) That's precisely what I was thinking. I've gone ahead and implemented that. Wok142 (talk) 07:18, January 31, 2025 (UTC) The legacy section should still be integrated within the biography; what I meant was splitting the paragraph commencing with "A human female" into two, enabling you to create subsections within the biography for the daughter's life and death, followed by their legacy. My apologies for any lack of clarity Lewisr (talk) 06:41, February 1, 2025 (UTC) Is this more in line with what you envisioned? Wok142 (talk) 18:31, February 1, 2025 (UTC) Yes! Thank you. I also believe the segment in the quote regarding the difficulty for Yeager in losing one daughter should be incorporated Lewisr (talk) 20:11, February 4, 2025 (UTC) Excellent. Wok142 (talk) 07:40, February 5, 2025 (UTC) - The image category is disrupting the Appearances section. I'm not sure what you're referring to; it appears quite organized on my end. Wok142 (talk) 08:03, February 23, 2025 (UTC) In accordance with WP:LG/IU in the "Mediacat" section, the Mediacat template should only be positioned under Appearances if it "doesn't interfere with the presentation of media titles." I'm uncertain if it appears differently on your PC, but on mine, it compresses the titles within the Appearances section. It should likely be located under "Notes and references." LucaRoR (Talk) 08:45, February 23, 2025 (UTC) It seems to display correctly on other PCs, so I'll retract the objection. However, we should definitely standardize this. LucaRoR (Talk) 19:23, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - The intro lacks clarity regarding Speedstar being the cause of their death. I suggest rephrasing the sentence to explicitly state this, similar to how it's presented in the main text. - I think references 7, 8, and 9 could be combined. At least references 7 and 8. I've taken care of these two. Wok142 (talk) 08:03, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - The second legacy paragraph would benefit from a paragraph break. Subsequently, two sub-headings could potentially be added. I've re-formatted it into three paragraphs of more uniform length; does this suffice? Personally, I believe this arrangement is superior to two diminutive subsections. Wok142 (talk) 08:03, February 23, 2025 (UTC) It looks great! LucaRoR (Talk) 08:45, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - I'm uncertain if there's a precedent for this, but linking the family to "daughter" feels somewhat awkward to me. I believe there are more suitable locations to link it within the body, albeit later in the text. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:52, February 22, 2025 (UTC) Addressed. Wok142 (talk) 08:03, February 23, 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Tuut Orial - This was nominated by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) 22:05, January 18, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: A long shot, perhaps, but I sincerely hope a Topps promo image materializes for this individual at some juncture. - Total words at nomination: 459 words (55 in the introduction, 284 in the main section, 120 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Mandoverse ### (3 ACs/0 Users/3 Total) (Votes required: To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Octucor - This was nominated by: Imperators II (Talk) 08:24, January 19, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 476 words (72 in the introduction, 268 in the main section, 136 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks ### (2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Ordo (Talpini) - This was nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 03:12, January 20, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 841 words (128 in the introduction, 598 in the main section, 115 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Unidentified red-skinned Nihil - This was nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 03:14, January 20, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 645 words (94 in the introduction, 469 in the main section, 82 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Chiri - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 01:33, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 974 words (165 in the introduction, 775 in the main section, 34 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:THR ### (2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Jenneh Ley - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 01:36, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 710 words (140 in the introduction, 536 in the main section, 34 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:THR WP:WOMEN ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Diplomatic mission to Starlight Beacon - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 01:42, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 524 words (133 in the introduction, 336 in the main section, 55 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS WP:MD WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Bubbles - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 01:45, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 550 words (131 in the introduction, 386 in the main section, 33 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:THR ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Bucco bread - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 02:00, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 504 words (128 in the introduction, 325 in the main section, 51 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS WP:ENT WP:THR ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Samana spiced loaf - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 02:13, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 529 words (138 in the introduction, 338 in the main section, 53 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS WP:ENT WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Peleg Ryn - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 02:18, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 768 words (166 in the introduction, 568 in the main section, 34 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:PRIDE WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Unidentified founder of Lonisa City - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 02:25, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 339 words (80 in the introduction, 216 in the main section, 43 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Maree (Skarhorn) - This was nominated by: Lewisr ( discussion ) 02:31, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 530 words (112 in the introduction, 354 in the main section, 64 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object - I feel that the detail about the mother instructing her to be proud is unnecessary for personality & traits - considering we lack actual knowledge of whether she felt pride or not; it was merely the mother expressing what she believed her daughter should feel. Wok142 ( discussion ) 18:07, February 16, 2025 (UTC) Removed Lewisr (talk) 00:18, February 17, 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Munyip - This was nominated by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) 14:10, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: I was inspired to work on some Endor creatures, so here's a companion to rugger - Total words at nomination: 525 words (82 in the introduction, 297 in the main section, 146 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ewoks ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Unidentified Nihil (Gavi) - This was nominated by: Chipchip88 ( discussion ) 22:55, January 23, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: Round two - Total words at nomination: 469 words (98 in the introduction, 315 in the main section, 56 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS , WP:THR ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object - Contextualizing the Warden as a warlord, which is more pertinent to his current status than a disgraced enforcer, is something I think should be done (citable to issue 13) Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - The issue suggests that Escape from Valo occurred a few months prior; therefore, I'd adjust the mention of it being a year before to reflect this Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - Given that not all Nihil on Valo were killed (some were apprehended), I'd opt for the issue's phrasing that the forces were depleted instead Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - The reference for Gavi being a youngling can be omitted, as the issue mentions it upon his initial introduction Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - Gavi's pronouns are not supported by the issue Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - There appears to be some form of fur worn by the Nihil, which should be documented in the equipment section when discussing the armor Lewisr ( discussion ) 06:27, February 23, 2025 (UTC) Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 18:17, February 23, 2025 (UTC) It's worth noting that only the initial use of pronouns necessitates citation Lewisr (talk) 19:45, February 23, 2025 (UTC) - One additional point: when discussing the depletion of Nihil forces previously, I believe it should be mentioned that the Nihil believe Valo to still be occupied, and they were unaware that the forces had actually been depleted, operating solely under the assumption of continued occupation Lewisr ( discussion ) 19:45, February 23, 2025 (UTC) Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 00:54, February 24, 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Aplooine - This was nominated by: Imperators II (Talk) 08:28, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 317 words (58 in the introduction, 185 in the main section, 74 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST ### (2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Coruscul - This was nominated by: Imperators II (Talk) 08:28, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 393 words (73 in the introduction, 246 in the main section, 74 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST ### (2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Unidentified Nihil (Tanana's crew) - This was nominated by: Chipchip88 ( discussion ) 19:19, January 27, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: - Total words at nomination: 371 words (83 in the introduction, 232 in the main section, 56 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS , WP:THR ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 2 user votes or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object - I think Zyle's response, or at least a portion of it, should be included in the opening quote Lewisr ( discussion ) 04:52, February 9, 2025 (UTC) - The fact that they contacted the crew via hologram should be highlighted in the biography Lewisr ( discussion ) 04:52, February 9, 2025 (UTC) Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 18:54, February 9, 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Quork - This was nominated by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) 16:07, January 29, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: So the Quorks made their initial appearance in Ewoks 3 and then reappeared in Ewoks 4 … forty years later. Makes perfect sense. - Total words at nomination: 387 words (65 in the introduction, 217 in the main section, 105 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ewoks , Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Aliens ### (1 ACs/1 Users/2 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 1 user vote or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object - The infobox states the fur is white, while the body describes it as gray. I'm uncertain which is accurate, but consistency is needed. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:21, February 22, 2025 (UTC) Corrected. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:41, February 22, 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Gupin - This was nominated by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) 17:08, January 29, 2025 (UTC) - Nomination notes: I sincerely hope we witness some form of united Endor council representing various species during the New Republic era. - Total words at nomination: 466 words (60 in the introduction, 256 in the main section, 150 in the behind the scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ewoks , Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Aliens ### (0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total) (Votes required: A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, you need 1 user vote or 1 AC vote in addition to the minimum.) #### Support #### Object #### Comments ## Pokkit -

Proposed by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) at 09:59 on January 30, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: My strong suspicion is that Pokkit is an Umbaran, which I base on her eyes resembling those of Sly Moore. However, due to the existence of numerous light-skinned humanoids, I haven't definitively confirmed it using the duck test. - Total article length at time of proposal: 888 words (149 in the introduction, 705 in the main content, 34 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Mandoverse ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative #### Remarks ## Flying attack droid - Proposed by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) at 13:55 on January 31, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: They bear a resemblance to Marksman-H training remotes with added components, but the similarity isn't significant enough to warrant mentioning. - Total article length at time of proposal: 340 words (67 in the introduction, 245 in the main content, 28 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Mandoverse ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative #### Remarks ## Unidentified Dug - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 14:08 on January 31, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 427 words (68 in the introduction, 281 in the main content, 78 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (2 ACs/1 Users/3 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, 1 user vote or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative - A similar situation arises here as with the Unidentified Republic captain (Trymant system). I believe a brief mention of the evacuations should be added towards the end of the main body. -- Vitus Infinitus Talk 05:36, 17 February 2025 (UTC) A brief note was added, but I maintain the same sentiment as with the captain's nomination regarding the rest of the event's irrelevance to both characters.—spookywillowwtalk 00:51, 24 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Buzza - Proposed by: CometSmudge ( discussion ) at 03:45 on February 1, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: yub nub - Total article length at time of proposal: 909 words (171 in the introduction, 655 in the main content, 83 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:Ewoks WP:Comics ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative #### Remarks ## Parang Squad - Proposed by: First Order Corporal First Order comms at 13:50 on February 1, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: This is the last of the Sith Jet Trooper squads. - Total article length at time of proposal: 286 words (79 in the introduction, 182 in the main content, 25 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative #### Remarks ## Unidentified Frigosian informant - Proposed by: Chipchip88 ( discussion ) at 02:25 on February 2, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: Now for some Saber for Hire nominations - Total article length at time of proposal: 499 words (102 in the introduction, 342 in the main content, 55 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:COMICS , WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Affirmative #### Negative #### Remarks ## Magellan - Proposed by: Imperators II (Talk) at 08:04 on February 6, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: I welcome speculation on what "Magellan" might refer to within the Star Wars universe. :P - Total article length at time of proposal: 657 words (113 in the introduction, 426 in the main content, 118 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:Ambition ### (2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 1 AC vote is needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Pablo - Proposed by: Mor9347 (Talk) at 10:07 on February 7, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: I can't believe I nominated Pablo Hidalgo! - Total article length at time of proposal: 510 words (90 in the introduction, 381 in the main content, 39 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:TCW ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - The introduction needs a specific date. Skin color and eye color should only be in the infobox. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 17:56 on February 7, 2025 (UTC) All addressed! Mor9347 (Talk) 01:05, 8 February 2025 (UTC) I am still seeing multiple contractions. Wok142 (talk) 03:40, 8 February 2025 (UTC) My apologies, I forgot those; they are fixed now! Mor9347 (Talk) 08:06, 10 February 2025 (UTC) - The introduction states "After angering Bane, who had choked him," but Bane actually became angry and then choked him. I think what they acquired should be noted. Bane got his hat, and they all got some other gear, I believe. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 03:40 on February 8, 2025 (UTC) The introduction rewording looks good! The other objections have been addressed! Mor9347 (Talk) 08:06, 10 February 2025 (UTC) - I apologize for the segmented objections, but I have more to add. First, the mention of the Clone Wars is currently only in the introduction, so it should be in the main content as well. When you do that, you'll need to mention the Republic and CIS as per usual. Pablo Hidalgo himself needs context. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 09:20 on February 11, 2025 (UTC) Objections addressed. Mor9347 (Talk) 19:20, 12 February 2025 (UTC) Thank you for your patience. For your information, I changed the context for Hidalgo to "Lucasfilm Story Group member" rather than simply "author" because he is more than just an ordinary author. Wok142 (talk) 18:40, 13 February 2025 (UTC) - There are a few minor details I think could be added. 1) The episode gallery for the episode guide directly states that Bane is threatening his life, so even though we adjusted the wording earlier to make that strange part ambiguous, this aspect can be explicitly mentioned. 2) Pablo's databank entry describes him as a "slimy trader" who sells "deadly gear," and both seem worth including. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 19:55 on February 20, 2025 (UTC) I have reworded some parts to include the information. Let me know what you think! Mor9347 (Talk) 20:18, 20 February 2025 (UTC) Nicely done. Wok142 (talk) 03:52, 22 February 2025 (UTC) - Both Nal Hutta being a planet and the Clone Wars being between the Republic and Separatists can be cited to Star Wars: The Visual Encyclopedia, so I would recommend switching the references. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) - Quick question, because I don't really recall offhand, but how do we know the Twi'lek is Pablo's partner? Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) Both the encyclopedia and its copy-over to the databank identify them as his "Twi'lek partner." It is not clear if they are simply a business partner or a romantic partner because of how affectionate they seem to be of him, so that's why they are absent from the partners box. Mor9347 (Talk) 03:33, 15 February 2025 (UTC) Thank you for clarifying! Then I think they should be introduced sooner, preferably in the first paragraph where you mention the shop, and it should be cited to the encyclopedia if not in the episode. Lewisr (talk) 05:36, 15 February 2025 (UTC) - The first use of Pablo's pronouns is cited to the episode. If it can be cited to the episode, then the infobox should be changed to follow suit, or it will need to be cited to the encyclopedia. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) - Coruscant being a planet isn't citable to "Deception," but it is to The Visual Encyclopedia. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) - The episode's airdate isn't citable to the episode guide; I would change the reference to Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) - The relevant pronouns category is missing. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:19 on February 14, 2025 (UTC) All objections addressed! Mor9347 (Talk) 03:33, 15 February 2025 (UTC) I believe the Coruscant one slipped by. Lewisr (talk) 05:36, 15 February 2025 (UTC) You are correct; that is my mistake. I have also moved Pablo's partner's mention up in both the body and introduction! Mor9347 (Talk) 15:38, 15 February 2025 (UTC) - I think it's worth noting that he spoke Basic in a skills/abilities section. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 04:53 on February 20, 2025 (UTC) - The medicat should be added into sources; the Legends page has it if you don't know the formatting/how to add it. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 04:53 on February 20, 2025 (UTC) - Since Nal Hutta is stated in the encyclopedia to be his homeworld, I think the biography should make that clearer. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 04:53 on February 20, 2025 (UTC) Addressed! Mor9347 (Talk) 14:38, 20 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## 187th Legion - Proposed by: -- Vitus Infinitus Talk at 06:00 on February 9, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 990 words (79 in the introduction, 432 in the main content, 479 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - Ideally, introduce Mace Windu when mentioning his purple lightsaber in the Description section. Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:11, 16 February 2025 (UTC) - Could the Members section be merged into the Description section? Done --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:11, 16 February 2025 (UTC) - Similar to the 187th Battalion, the information about the same name seems best in the Description. Fixed. With all three above objections, I slightly restructured the description section. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:11, 16 February 2025 (UTC) - Should Kristin Baver have context in the BTS? Wok142 ( discussion ) at 06:49 on February 15, 2025 (UTC) Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:11, 16 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks Mor - Just a small thing, not really an objection, but could the infobox image be made transparent, or is there a reason why it isn't? Mor9347 (Talk) at 06:07 on February 9, 2025 (UTC) I will reach out to JMAS! --Vitus InfinitusTalk 03:18, 12 February 2025 (UTC) ## Wim's mother - Proposed by: CometSmudge ( discussion ) at 18:13 on February 9, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 347 words (88 in the introduction, 230 in the main content, 29 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Mandoverse ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Unidentified Yasaburō clan member (soul patch) - Proposed by: Mor9347 (Talk) at 11:22 on February 10, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 392 words (99 in the introduction, 229 in the main content, 64 in the behind-the-scenes section) - Total article length at time of proposal: 392 words (99 in the introduction, 229 in the main content, 64 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:Visions ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - The BTS should include the episode's release date, studio, and volume, and include that Visions is a non-canon animated anthology series. (Bichan is a good example) - I think it would be worth noting in the BTS that their lines are not in the manga adaptation. CometSmudge ( discussion ) at 21:43 on February 11, 2025 (UTC) Objections addressed. Mor9347 (Talk) 17:34, 12 February 2025 (UTC) - The manga needs a release date, author, and publisher. CometSmudge ( discussion ) at 18:00 on February 12, 2025 (UTC) Addressed. Mor9347 (Talk) 19:36, 12 February 2025 (UTC) I don't think the release date is directly citable to the manga. CometSmudge (talk) 20:21, 12 February 2025 (UTC) Resolved. Mor9347 (Talk) 02:37, 13 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Marzi - Proposed by: OtterSurf ( discussion ) at 19:12 on February 10, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: Is her second name Pan? - Total article length at time of proposal: 325 words (82 in the introduction, 223 in the main content, 20 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - The "Children" field in the infobox is being used incorrectly; please empty it. - The top quote requires further contextualization. - There is no date anywhere in this article. Fan26 ( Talk ) 22:40, 10 February 2025 (UTC) All fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 09:45, 11 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Republic Security Zone Monitoring Satellite 777B-Alpha - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 01:06 on February 12, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 431 words (54 in the introduction, 295 in the main content, 82 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:AST WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - Trymant IV should be linked and could use some context. - The Trymant IV disaster is technically only in the introduction; it would be great if you could sneak a link to it into the main body. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:02, 23 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Trymant system's second sun - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 02:15 on February 12, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 391 words (92 in the introduction, 265 in the main content, 34 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:NOVELS WP:AST ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Kaminoan Armorsmiths Ltd. - Proposed by: CometSmudge ( discussion ) at 03:16 on February 12, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 424 words (72 in the introduction, 281 in the main content, 71 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - Kamino being a "location" in the infobox doesn't seem to be truly present in the main body; that could do with a quick mention. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 07:07 on February 18, 2025 (UTC) I did mention in the Organization section that their subsidiary is based there, but that's the only explicit mention of the company having any presence on Kamino, which is why I didn't mention it anywhere else. CometSmudge (talk) 18:09, 18 February 2025 (UTC) Ah, I see... seems fine as is then. Wok142 (talk) 18:20, 18 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Unidentified Republic captain (Trymant system) - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 00:08 on February 15, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 382 words (57 in the introduction, 247 in the main content, 78 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 1 user vote or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - I think it would be important to include a brief summary of the Attack on Trymant IV towards the end of the body section, as Jedi and Republic forces were able to respond to the captain's call for aid and evacuate civilians. -- Vitus Infinitus Talk 05:27, 17 February 2025 (UTC) I added a brief note about civilians eventually being evacuated and who did so, but I quite sharply disagree on summarizing the event itself. Ro, the Nihil, the subsequent attack, Zeen/Krix drama—all of those portions of the Trymant attack itself have nothing to do with the captain (or their subordinate).—spookywillowwtalk 00:48, 24 February 2025 (UTC) Yeah, what you added was perfect; I didn't mean a summary of the entire event, mostly just the evacuation. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:17, 24 February 2025 (UTC) #### Remarks ## Teers - Proposed by: Ayrehead02 ( discussion ) at 00:09 on February 17, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: It's odd that three canon sources have mentioned Teers, but Been and Slarm haven't come up at all. - Total article length at time of proposal: 565 words (80 in the introduction, 337 in the main content, 148 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Women ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 2 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Garank - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 03:59 on February 17, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 713 words (91 in the introduction, 507 in the main content, 115 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Unidentified orange-skinned Nihil - Proposed by: —spookywillowwtalk at 03:59 on February 17, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 728 words (79 in the introduction, 567 in the main content, 82 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Remarks ## Third Legion - Proposed by: -- Vitus Infinitus Talk at 04:33 on February 17, 2025 (UTC) - Reason for proposal: - Total article length at time of proposal: 316 words (72 in the introduction, 211 in the main content, 33 in the behind-the-scenes section) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:TCW ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (To meet the minimum requirement, 3 AC votes are needed. To pass, 2 user votes or 1 AC vote are additionally required.) #### Support votes #### Objections - The introduction could benefit from including the date. Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - I'm not sure if Coruscant needs the context of "planet" beyond "Republic capital," but yes, it may need an extra reference. If you don't mind sliding that in there, that would be chill. Wok142 ( discussion ) at 07:18 on February 18, 2025 (UTC) Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - Balith needs context in the introduction. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:59 on February 23, 2025 (UTC) Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - If we're specifically citing Obi-Wan's rank, then Yoda being a Grand Master and Anakin being commander of the 501st should really also be cited, as both are not in the episode itself. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:59 on February 23, 2025 (UTC) Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - Do we know the rest of the Council were involved? I'd say it's better to just note Obi-Wan and Yoda informed Anakin. Lewisr ( discussion ) at 19:59 on February 23, 2025 (UTC)

(UTC) Revised --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - The pronouns used for Anakin are not supported by a citation to the episode according to Lewisr ( talk ) 19:59, 23 February 2025 (UTC) Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:05, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - In my opinion, this page should have a description section that incorporates the beginning of the first sentence found in the history, even if that section is brief (for an example, look at 209th Stormtrooper Division ) Lewisr ( talk ) 03:41, 24 February 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## Revenge - Proposed by : Imperators II (Talk) 09:41, 17 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 426 words (106 introduction, 278 body, 42 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:Ambition ### (1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total) (A minimum of 2 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Graceful Promising - Proposed by : Imperators II (Talk) 20:37, 17 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : My thanks go to Dani! - Word count when nominated : 422 words (88 introduction, 312 body, 22 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Moldour - Proposed by : Imperators II (Talk) 20:37, 17 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : My thanks go to Dani! - Word count when nominated : 418 words (120 introduction, 284 body, 14 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:AST ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Peleth - Proposed by : CometSmudge ( talk ) 22:12, 17 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 464 words (123 introduction, 258 body, 83 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:THR WP:Women WP:Novels ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Unidentified Predak Vane ship - Proposed by : Lewisr ( talk ) 04:04, 19 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 424 words (119 introduction, 270 body, 35 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:COMICS ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Unidentified Gaze Electric captain - Proposed by : —spookywillowwtalk 03:30, 20 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 471 words (45 introduction, 309 body, 117 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:COMICS WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Di Mantid - Proposed by : Skifffy ( talk ) 04:35, 21 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 619 words (88 introduction, 334 body, 197 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Women ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Unidentified humanoid Nihil - Proposed by : —spookywillowwtalk 04:10, 22 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 648 words (94 introduction, 472 body, 82 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:COMICS WP:THR ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Unidentified Imperial Security Bureau admiral - Proposed by : CometSmudge ( talk ) 21:03, 22 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 659 words (117 introduction, 441 body, 101 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WP:Visions WP:AMB ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections #### Comments ## Unidentified dinghy driver - Proposed by : @Mustafar29 「talk」 (he/him/his/hisself) 13:46, 23 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : Out of all the characters, why this one? Well, firstly, it holds the distinction of being the first Teek visually represented in canon! Without it, we would only possess written accounts. Secondly, it is unlikely that the little ferryman will undergo significant alterations in the future. Given its relatively small role and the completion of Skeleton Crew, we probably won't see it in any source until, potentially, a comic book adaptation, which I hope happens. Furthermore, the article boasts numerous high-quality multimedia elements, such as images and audio clips. Lastly, the BTS section is thorough, well-researched, and informative, even referencing an Empire issue, where NBDani recognized it. Finally, I want to give special thanks to ThePedantry, who also contributed to the article and supported my nomination ❤️ - Word count when nominated : 882 words (119 introduction, 533 body, 230 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : WookieeProject: Mandoverse ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. An additional 2 user votes or 1 AC vote is required for passage.) #### Support votes #### Objections - It seems we are missing their brief cameo in the 3rd episode. The driver transports the kids and Jod back to the Cinder around the 7-minute mark after their escape. (I believed I added that appearance, but I must not have). - ThePedantry ( talk ) 23:35, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - Even though I do understand the meaning of 'tongue' in "Despite not understanding its tongue", it might be clearer if you use "its native language" or just "its language". - ThePedantry ( talk ) 23:35, 24 February 2025 (UTC) - I'd suggest that you expand the following sentence with more context drawn from the podcast. "It's possible that the character was voiced by the actor Sam Witwer". - ThePedantry ( talk ) 23:35, 24 February 2025 (UTC) #### Comments ## MT-7 - Proposed by : BreadyBird ( talk ) 18:19, 23 February 2025 (UTC) - Comments on the nomination : - Word count when nominated : 372 words (77 introduction, 249 body, 46 behind the scenes) - WookieeProject (optional) : ### (0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total) (A minimum of 3 AC votes are needed. 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